Do I really get to start this?
"This neuro system stuff is bs. Been studying it everyday for a week and nothing has sunk in yet. On the otherhand, my lit professor says I do great work, that I get inside characters head.[/QUOTE]
I said: You need to round out the characters - what is their chemical attraction or repulsion so to speak - what is their motive ... there must be a motive ...
Here's a site with notes, check and see if it is above and beyond or helpful. The print is kinda small so you could cut/paste/increase the font. I wish I could help ya (I could hold the pencil and ponk you on the head with the eraser when you made a mistake!)
NO idea if it is a good site or not but if it looks familiar to you it is probably ok!